Bones & Stones

All the political hype these days is wearing me out, and the tide is still rising. There’s a fervor around pending elections we haven’t seen in many years, which at face value seems a good thing. But I heard a comment recently from a woman campaigning for a senatorial candidate who recently stood up to our president and declared his shame for the actions of our commander in chief, as if this should be a quality of significance to sway voter’s minds for this candidate vying for a senate seat. Yep, lots of folks are mad, our country is “reeling”, the economy is “strained”, and once the war and health care get resolved by a new president, new party, everything is going to be “OK”.

Kidding, right? Politicians judging politicians, and “we the people” choosing sides based on their “trustworthy” rhetoric. When I hear statements about how “either Clinton or Obama will do”, we just need a Democrat in the White House, I get even more concerned about what’s at the core of our problems in the world today.

Jesus said, let those without guilt cast the first stone at the sinner (paraphrased). Who among us doesn’t have bones stashed in a closet that may someday become a skeleton hung on the front page of a newspaper or blog for all to see and judge? Like many (if not most), I’m quick to “qualify” others. The bones stashed in the back of my closet don’t even make up a skeleton because I’ve not taken time to truthfully inspect my own flaws and heart issues, so there is no form. If the bones represent my selfish pride and deception, my lack of compassion and putting my imaginations and desires ahead of God, then I need to deal with myself first, not blame someone else for problems, whether perceived or real.

As I see it, the choices we have for our next president leave lots to be desired. They keep stumbling over their own words, waiting to pounce on each others “flaws”, tickling the ears of those who believe a new president (or any other human) is going to make life “better”. Newsflash, it all starts with humbling ourselves as a nation (2 Chronicles 7:14) and addressing real issues. Most folks in financial trouble don’t budget, they overspend wildly on credit cards, and refuse to seek the wisdom of experienced, honest counsel when making life altering financial decisions. Lots of people who are out of work have the opportunity to modernize their skills and improve their quality of life, most won’t because working at the mill or plant is all they’ve ever known. Obesity and dependency on a plethora of substances is rampant. Immigrants who enter this country illegally get better and more frequent health care than our senior citizens living month to month on a pittance of social security. Our neighborhoods are at war with gangs, pedophiles, and lifelong criminals who evade the law and impact our livelihood — but if we get out of Iraq, everything is going to be OK… right?

We laugh at Leno’s “Jaywalking” segments, when he asks people about well known history and even current events and they haven’t a clue as to the answer, funny, huh?. People who flood across our borders illegally rant about their supposed rights, but won’t stand to pledge allegiance to the flag; and our kids can’t sing Christmas songs if a teacher allows a child of non-Christian faith to stand against American tradition… the country we fought so hard and so long for is slipping through our hands so we can all join a sing-along around a global campfire — I for one don’t buy it.

How’s a new president going to solve what’s really wrong?

We’ve twisted, demeaned, and ignored God’s Word for decades. Our society continues eroding, so we point fingers at the president, our government, local, state, or federal, or whoever we can find to blame. I wonder what would happend if we took all the faith we put into politics and turned our eyes and hopes back to Heaven? Maybe, like, humbly ask God to restore this nation, to take us back to the mindset of our fore-fathers? Things are so complicated — the only thing I know to do is cast the vote I’m entitled to this coming November, and trust God to work out the rest. Sometimes going back to square one, back to simple, is the answer. God promises fresh grace and new mercy for each day, it’s up to us to go there to receive it.

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WAJ-Notes

Wow (whew… etc), just back from a week in Nashville, I’m sorting through the wheat and chaff, notes and stuff everywhere… so glad I took all my WAJ notes in the back of the workbook! One of my goals upon return is to share what I captured, so here goes… please keep in mind these are my perspectives in the moment, if anyone that was there sees something I totally mis-captured, please let me know, thanks!

9a: Finding Creativity When You Don’t Feel Creative - Belinda Smith

  • Belinda stressed the indispensable value of Sheila Davis’s “The Songwriter’s Idea Book”, and how showing up for scheduled time to write (something that’s gotten away from me the last six months, or so) honors the giver of our gifts, a sobering reminder
  • She also led us in a couple of exercises to help with activating the right brain and squelching the “inner critic” that can stifle creativity, but stressed the need to get back to the focal point when the meandering gets too fragmented
    • For instance, imagine a scenario and build a short list of words based on the scene, then develop a list of potential titles (free the linear mindset/capture the scattered)
  • One other note I captured is to scan movie titles for those you haven’t seen and write the song behind it. We discussed a couple of titles and it was really cool to hear the variety of perspectives each one generated

 

10a: Co-Writing Secrets - Maurice Carter led a panel (M. Funderburk, T. Labar, S. Krippayne, K. Stokes) on keys to and importance of co-writing

  • Preparation: Know your co-writer’s expectations; build relationships; bring multiple ideas to the session, the idea I’m passionate about may not feel the same way; could be lyrical or musical start points
  • Distractions: Flexibility is key, be open-minded to all ideas but know when to graciously pass on an idea that’s just not working for me
    • Be vulnerable; share and receive… be in it for the long-haul; consider it time well spent from more than a songwriting perspective
    • Be careful not to settle… I have to love the idea but be willing to let go once I’ve tried to “sell” the idea; dialog in spirit and truth
  • A weaker lyrical hook is OK as long as the melody is a home run
  • The writers shared that 80-90% of all the songs they write are co-writes

 

11a: Developing Great Ideas - Belinda Smith led a panel (S. Siler, K. Matthews) on taking ideas from good to great

  • It’s not about competing with other writers but with myself, am I getting better?
  • See the story in the idea
    • Filter the list
    • Co-writing is the school for writing and the acid test for ideas
  • Key characteristics of an idea
    • Can the idea be approached from more than one angle?
    • Can I get to the hook from multiple perspectives?
    • Does the title move me?
    • Can I sing the melody two weeks later?
    • Is this a topical/theological contribution that’s fresh… fill gaps in areas not currently being discussed
    • Write the same idea in multiple genres/persons/POV
  • Good or Great?
    • Live the experience from the listener’s perspective… is their a transformation moment?
    • Tell the truth!!!
    • Make the listener think: how did the writer know this is me in this moment?
    • Lead others into the emotion you feel

 

1p: Going from Good to Great - Dave Clark

  • Does the song draw the listener whether the listener is ready or not?
  • Does the song appeal beyond “taste” boundaries?
  • Don’t let bad listening take the place of good writing (Dave stressed this being the key note of the session)
  • Emotional equity - get personally invested in the song
  • Quote by Greg Maddux on staying true to the great idea: “I would rather give up a hit on a good pitch than strike someone out on a bad one.”
  • Study political speeches - especially inaugural speeches
  • Separate what too personal to generalized details, put specifics into developing the emotion in the idea

 

2p: Audit Critique Session - S. Siler/C. Cates

3p: Critique Session - K. Matthews/K. Stokes

 

4p: Writing for the Country Market - Brian White/Don Poythress

  • It’s not always going to be OK… people lose jobs, get sick, divorced, etc.
  • CCM has a tendency to play it safe, Country just plays the card
  • Try using an everyday man mentality in worship songs (Tomlin has done this)
  • Don’t write a song that says I’m lonely, make the listener feel lonely
  • Furniture - nouns (Wiseman explains with pictures… The Good Stuff)
  • Not many new ideas, it’s all about developing fresh angles